He Couldn’t Stand It!

He was young. And he was one of the best students! He loved going out with his family and his friends. He was always to the top of the cutest boys’ list. But he didn’t care about this.

He was in love with one girl. One and only girl. He liked her from the first time he met her. And he showed it to her! And so she did. They were the couple, every girl in school was jealous of.

One day came, that this girl dissapeared. Noone knew what happened and why she dissapeared! She had left. She had left school, her friends, her family And him! And there was no reason to do this.

One month later, it was learned that she was dead. She had gone to the top of a mountain and as she was sitting on a rock, she falled!

As he learned about her, he got shocked! He couldn’t get that she had gone, forever. He couldn’t even understant why she had gone up there and how did she falled down! He took a gun from his parents’ wardrobe and he left without telling it ti anyone. Noone realised he had find the gun.

He went up to this mountain. He detonated his gun and he got killed!

My responce toThe Daily Post

This is a small Novel-Inspiration post, inspirated from the word Detonate. I hope you like it!

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I started writing (Greek Novels & Narratives) at the age of 13-14. I use to write about thriller, or drama, or both into one Novel. From the age of 19, I own my blog "Open Mind", which I created on my own! I write small texts, all about the way we think, act and generally the way we live! From the age of 20, I create my Gallery into the blog. It is about photographs I take! Most of them, are about sights of the sea, the sky, the clouds. I love to keep moments! Either into my writings, or through photographs. I don't trust my memory, because it will probably leave me someday, as everyone loses his memories as he grows up! Into this blog, you will find: Posts about everything I write on my own. (small texts, responses, novels, narratives) Photographs into Gallery that I shoot, most of them have no effect. --> Selected images into my writings' posts, are most of them from the internet - pixabay.com! ~You will find the Creative Commons into menu! Thank you for your time!~

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